Excerpt from Legs - please read and critique

One of the hardest aspects of being a writer involves letting people actually read your work.

::Blink. Blink. Let that sink in.::

I've hesitated to put any of my writing out there, so I'm cleaning up a nice 5-page sample to post later this week. Today I'm focused on getting my Monday Review Contest review ready, but in the meantime, here's a one-sentence excerpt:

She buried her hands in the thick curls at the back of his head and kissed him so thoroughly he was sure she'd lick her own palm.

There you go. Literary fiction at its finest.